it's my first critique ever so I'm not sure how to do it Reading the title I think I can imagine what was the idea of this shot: nostalgic, romantic, expressing the introvertic mood. So I think it would be better if you took this shot from a wider perspective and maybe a little bit from above (sorry for my bad English). The pose is here right, the girl looks really like someone who's deep in memories. I really like her hair too. The aftereffect of light (above, right corner) is a good idea here. What kind of camera do you have ? I'm afraid it destroys a little the quality...
Reading the title I think I can imagine what was the idea of this shot: nostalgic, romantic, expressing the introvertic mood.
So I think it would be better if you took this shot from a wider perspective and maybe a little bit from above (sorry for my bad English).
The pose is here right, the girl looks really like someone who's deep in memories. I really like her hair too.
The aftereffect of light (above, right corner) is a good idea here. What kind of camera do you have ? I'm afraid it destroys a little the quality...
I hope you don't find my critique to critic
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